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a part of a book that is being worked on. hope u all like it

Posted by Ambu101 - February 3rd, 2010


As he is running down the hall away from a three headed dog. He starts to scream "Help help someone help!"

"Oh god please some one help me I don't want to die like this!" As he is screaming and start's to cry I fear.

You can hear the sound of the three headed dog's nails taping on the sum-ant flooring as it fallows him to make him it's next victim. As he is running around a corner he lock's himself in a closed in prison cell thinking he is safe from the monster that is hunting him down.

" Ok I should be safe in here." not know the gory site that he is about to see.

He kneels down on the floor and takes off his backpack to take out a flashlight to have a look around. He turns on the flashlight and see blood and body parts all over the wall's and he starts to throw up on the floor.

"How gross I can't believe it. What can do this there's heads, dismembered body's ,and some of them are even ripped apart into to!" as he says in horror.

" What I can't hear any thing out side of this room I think it's safe know." He says as he is scared.

Drip drip drip as blood slowly drips from it mouth and it starts to growls in blood thirsty rage

" No it can't be possible u could not have gotten in here I locked the door and looked around it can't be true!? No stay back don't come any closer no awe" As he screams in pain the three headed dog attacks his left side of his body. one of the three head's bites on his lag, the middle head bite into his stomach, the last head bite's on his left arm and all three heads starts to slowly rip him apart wile he is still alive. Blood sprays all over and he screams in agonizing pain. Right after the have ripped him apart he is still alive then they slowly start to eat him bit by bit starting with the stomach. He starts to go it to hipper thermal shock, but he still feels all the pain.

"why why did this have to happen to me? My children my wife I never got to say good bye or tell them I loved them for one last time DAM IT whyyyyyy!!" as he asks him self in anger and about to cry in sadness choking on his blood.


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I dont like it. Theres no plot and the protaginist dies, and if you didnt notice, there are alot of run on sentences. Put in your commas in periods, make the protagisnist live and somehow find a way to kill the beast, post it in the WRITING forum, then you got a story :).

it is a horrer story and it tells u what happen later on in the book i'm working on the book still. i just made that up relly fast ok and he in not the mane character and it is a ghost.

Creepy..but overall good.

thanks at less some one likes the story